User talk:Life Infusion9685

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Archived your previous talk info for you, No need to blank them completely. :) &mdash; Rapta   (talk|contribs) 21:31, 20 July 2006 (CDT)

Up with UNKN
Hi Infusion. I ran across one of your edits and recognized the name from the guild. Small world. --Wee Tommy 17:19, 9 August 2006 (CDT)

Builds
I can't believe how little feedback you've been given considering the number of builds you submit! I reckon you write your builds much better now that you did in the past but just a few suggestions that you might want to take onboard.


 * You're still making the odd spelling/grammar mistake.


 * You underwikify things in a major way, I've noticed that in your build submissions for a long time.

"This is an attempt to make use of a few lesser used skills. It is not the most efficient build you've ever seen, so keep that in mind."
 * The written component is not bad but you could still make it a bit more formal, just stuff like:
 * I changed to:

"This is an attempt to make use of a few lesser used skills. It is not the most efficient healing build but excels at hex and condition removal."
 * Another example is:

"Probably has energy management issues."
 * Became

"Be careful as this build can easily have energy management issues."

Just to remove some of the "chattiness".

Anyway that's all I'll say, you'll notice in this edit of mine I tidied up a lot of stuff and given that you're probably the most prolific build submitter here, you might like to know some things I've noticed. You builds are always comprehensive and conform to S&F but there's always things we can all improve on. I've noticed you name your builds better now and your writing has improved (I think so anyway, I'm not stalking you or anything but I have read lots of your builds! :P ) Hopefully you'll appreciate the feedback and keep up the good work. --Xasxas256 21:19, 17 August 2006 (CDT)
 * Thanks for suggestions. If it concerns you, the reason for the spelling errors is I tend to write the builds on my free time in Notepad using a wiki template I made and saved in Notepad. Notepad doesn't mess up the text formatting, but it does not have a spell checker. That is the general reason why I "underwiki"...because I don't refer to the wiki for the skills I choose and comments are generally written quickly (notes-style) as I think of them. The succinct-ness is also because I am used to outline format when I take notes rather than an essay-like format.

I have a stockpile of build ideas (I think I sometimes put it in the Prof Combos page) using skills not used often I have ben contemplating to make, but didn't get around to until recently. The compelling factor in all builds is uniqueness. --Life Infusion 21:29, 17 August 2006 (CDT)