User talk:Adraeus

Hey Adraeus, nice article :) In future though, please put any notes to other editors in the Discussion page rather than the article itself :) LordBiro/Talk 20:28, 15 Jun 2005 (EST)

After editing the article the only criticism I can make is that it is very personal. Articles shouldn't be personal journals of events. Instead of saying "I did this and got this and it was great" instead say "If you do this you will get this". If the reader likes the sound of the result then he might think it's great as well, but equally they might not. LordBiro/Talk 21:01, 15 Jun 2005 (EST)