User talk:Smiling Eve/RPG/Character/Chapter 1

Eve talking to Silvia
One small remark: Silvia's mind reading never cost her any friends, mostly because she lived in a world where any such ability was just another way to keep the team alive, and she never hid it. There is magical mind reading there too anyway, which also means more people there are trained to resist mind reading.

It's a world with hi-tech weapons and corporate industrialized magic, and the people Silvia hung out with were shadowrunners, which are basically urban mercenaries, so those all had some sort of magic ability or special equipment to be an asset in the team. -Nyerguds 07:52, 15 April 2011 (UTC) (moved here from User_talk:Smiling_Eve/RPG/Character)


 * How long is she in this world? Did she have time to make friends here, and did she try? In "our" world it would cost friends. Smiling Eve  10:25, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
 * About three months, 2 of those trying to survive with nothing at all, the last one getting settled in a secret base and doing odd jobs for Mr Dorres. And she has a baby to take care of, on top of all that, so no, she hasn't had much social contact here. The issue is mainly that she never had any real reason not to tell people about it right away, which is why Quicksilver knew about it, of course. But in this group she was hesitant because she had already read some of their minds, and wasn't sure how people would react to that. She'd never been in a situation where she had to treat previous targets as allies all of the sudden.
 * She mainly spent those 2 first months stealing whatever she needed, using her claws and wings to easily get through windows and entrances that should be completely inaccessible. I'm considering writing about that too when I got some time :) -Nyerguds 10:53, 17 April 2011 (UTC)

Well, this seems perfect... I'd say, go ahead and post it :)

(well, I say perfect, but I mean besides the fact you wrote 'careful' with two L's at the end. That's not perfect :p) -Nyerguds 07:11, 18 April 2011 (UTC)

Embedding page
I'd just copy it if I were you... the title appears inside the RPG now, and overall, linking to pages for actual RPG content decentralizes the RPG data, which makes it rather chaotic. Nyerguds
 * Thanks for warning me. I didn't notice the heading and yes, it could turn out to be chaotic with links. Changed it now. Smiling Eve  11:34, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
 * You lost all the italics and line breaks. You should copy the post from the edit page, to make sure you keep all your markup ;) -Nyerguds 11:36, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
 * And here I thought it was easy... Thanks again... Smiling Eve  12:37, 18 April 2011 (UTC)