User talk:Lunarbunny10065

I've been the one floating around with the 168 and 24 IP addresses.


 * Hi, welcome to the wiki. :)  Quick tip, instead of creating a bunch of redirects for plural items just link to them like this: Moss Scarabs it shows up as: Moss Scarabs  --Rainith 03:56, 27 Sep 2005 (EST)


 * Thanks for the tip. Guess I need to look at the help just a *little* harder

Hi Lunarbunny! have fun on the wiki ^__^ --Skuld &Dagger; 05:06, 27 Sep 2005 (EST)

Gah...pardon me for forgetting to check "Minor edit."

Welcome aboard, Bunny, :) I like what you did with the Crystal Desert. Join the discussion at Talk:Locations if you have ideas about how to sort out regions and areas and outposts. --Karlos 09:49, 27 Sep 2005 (EST)

Signature tip: It seems you will be a frequent contributer.. Which is great! So, the first trick to learn is to sign your comments. You can do that by typing ~ or by pressing the "signature" button on the toolbar (the second from the right). Looking forward to more contributions! :) --Karlos 18:51, 27 Sep 2005 (EST)


 * Ok, needed that note. I'll try to remain a regular contributor, and not forget to sign ;) Lunarbunny 01:11, 28 Sep 2005 (EST)

Everybody knows too much...I haven't had a good contribution in who knows how long :/ - Lunarbunny 03:07, 26 October 2005 (EST)

Bork Bork Bork!
[Bork Bork Bork in Bork Bork Bork!]. Too bad Karlos ruined my fun and translated it to english. Bork bork bork! for the current article. :P --Chuiu 21:15, 17 November 2005 (UTC)

Storyline article
ok just so you know im not completely slamming your efforts on the storyline article. however, i dislike the way the article is written in second-person narrative (ie then you do this, then you kill this guys). i know it would be hard to do, but i would imagine the whole thing done in omniscient third-person (ie tell the story as if you are a god and you can see wats going on everywhere).

As an example:

The story begins with King Adelbern calling on his scribe to recruit the greatest heroes of Ascalon. Although confident that the Great Northern Wall will hold, the recent Charr attacks have been making him uneasy. Heroes flock to his call, but unbeknown to them the Charr north of the wall have been preparing an extremely powerful spell, and once unleashed, it rains monstrous crystals like meteors over all of Ascalon, an event that has come to be known as the Searing.

After a scant two years, the citzens of Ascalon find themselves in a post-apocalyptic world of suffering, madness, and death. Low on scouts, Captain Calhaan is forced to dispatch heroes from the now ruined Ascalon City over The Great Northern Wall to gather information on the activities of the Charr.

It becomes apparent that the Charr, led by Bonfaaz Burntfur, are amassing an army north of the wall. Bonfaaz leads his army in an all-out assault on the Great Northern Wall. Realizing that the soldiers are overmatched, Calhaan calls for a retreat to Fort Ranik.

After regrouping and reorganizing their troops, the ascalon army, spearheaded by valiant heroes, push their way north, slaughtering the Charr until they are forced back north of the wall. In this moment of triumph, Prince Rurik stands atop a ruined tower and proclaims that the Ascalonians will "take the fight to our enemies!".

No sooner has he said this when an Ascalon Guard comes running to report that many wounded soldiers have been taken prisoner during the Charr retreat. Rurik announces that his incursion will happen before the day is over.

blah blah blah ... as you can see, still mainly what you wrote, just told from a different point of view. Finally as i played through the game i never considered the missions as chapters, and as such i dont think the story can easily be seperated into missions. for me the chapters were more general, like the ascalons fight against the charr, their pilgrimage across the mountains, the plight of the chosen, the necessity of ascension. i havent actually got further than this so i couldnt name any more chapters ;)

so yeah, if you talked with Tetris L i think you guys could come up with an awesome article. Tetris doing the layou and you just fleshing it out a bit.

sorry for rambling. --Crusty 05:15, 15 November 2005 (UTC)


 * Bleh. First time back since the wiki went down. Karlos had a better summary (look in Talk:Storyline), and it's (I think) more like what Tetris L was looking for. I got carried away with the idea originally, and got a little too detailed. I like Karlos' storyline better anyway. Thanks for giving me a chance though. - Lunarbunny 13:32, 16 November 2005 (UTC)


 * Don't feel embarrassed. Whatever anyone says, your draft caused everyone to get on board and formulate the full article. Whether it was an inspiration or an alarming abomination is not the issue. :) Thanks and feel free to mercilessly edit mine (which I will move to the Storyline article). Thanks. --Karlos 17:50, 16 November 2005 (UTC)

Thanks!
Indeed, I did steal stuff. I expected to have a little more time to play with the formatting before someone would notice, oi! ^_^ If I ever get my page looking any good you'll be welcome to stela back from me XD Fate 13:42, 21 November 2005 (UTC)
 * I almost missed it trying to pay attention to the chemistry teacher hater. Keep it and mess with it as much as you please. - Lunarbunny 13:43, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

Grammar
I love your little grammar bit on your page. I'd suggest you add a bit on when to use to vs. too vs. two. (Just a personal pet peeve of mine when to is used instead of too, I'm not saying you've done this, but I think it could find a place in your article) :)  --Rainith 04:29, 24 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Hey, forgot about that one! Thanks - Lunarbunny 05:58, 24 November 2005 (UTC)